Here’s the beginning of a story following the life of Kilrogg Deadeye that I’ve been working on recently.
Deadeye-Chieftain of the Bleeding Hollow
A Prequel to Warlords of Draenor
“The very elements have become unruly…they listen not to our needs! Elder Shaman, what is your wisdom?” growled one of the shamanic initiates of the Bleeding Hollow clan.
The Elder-Shaman of the Bleeding Hollow grunted lowly, and slammed his ancient bark staff down onto the ground, getting ready to speak.
“If they ignore your will, then make them acknowledge you! Do NOT let the elements control you. You are their masters, and they are your minions!” growled the elder, ripping a chunk of molten earth from the swampy ground in anger.
“They do not have the will to escape our power. We will show the spirits pain. We will let NONE stand in our way!” roared a burly shaman who towered over the others.
“We will march upon all of our enemies’ grounds and we will emerge stronger with every victory! We will paint this world and many others red! This is our lifeblood-to conquer all who stand before us! This ‘Prophet’ from the Beyond-he will guide us to victory. None will stand before the Iron Horde and live…” growled a voice from behind the group, who had one eye and the other severed off.
“Kilrogg…have you seen the vision of your demise?” spoke the elder-shaman, lifting a muscular, tattooed brown hand toward the Chieftain of the Bleeding Hollow.
“I have seen the future, Elder-Shaman. This world will be ours, with time. The petty Draenei stand not a chance before our might and the might of our allies…” Kilrogg growled, revealing his monstrous, yellowed teeth.
“Good…good. All will be ours in time, Kilrogg. This world-and all others-shall be OURS! And with time, the Bleeding Hollow shall show their place as the true leaders-the true masters-of all!” roared the Elder-Shaman, sending a flare of unnatural, twisted lightning into the sky, that blazed some trees above and sent smoke billowing above them.
“We must not be too quick to join their Iron Horde…they could turn against us. The Warsong are an odd choice to lead this…massive coalition-and we do not know if the reports about the Draenei turning against us are accurate…” spoke an old warrior, leading against a partially-thorny tree.
“You are a pathetic coward, old man. You are hardly an Orc. I cannot believe our people allowed you to stay in our clan for so long. When the Draenei slay your miserable existence on the battlefield of honor, you will then see the truth!” growled Kilrogg, pointing an enormous, angered finger at the older orc.
“You see not my point, Kilrogg Deadeye. If our people charge headlong into the unknown, many of us could be a lost cause! Have we become a savage and brutal, careless clan, Chieftain? We would be no better than the monstrous beasts of the Tanaan if we allowed our people to die fighting a people we don’t even understand!” roared the older man, stomping his massive bare feet onto the cold, wet ground as he marched to Kilrogg.
“We don’t need your support or approval, weakling. We don’t need your axe at our side nor do we need your presence. You can hardly fight. You have grown sluggish and your young have all been slain. You know nothing of a legacy, nothing of honor…you may be an elder in age, but in spirit…you’re just a scared, cowering pup, with nowhere to hide…I see right through your pathetic, shaken vise. You will not survive this war should you join our cause. If you join forces with the misbegotten Draenei, you will be eliminated.” growled Kilrogg, looking down upon the old orc who snarled and held his grown against the bigger, younger of the two.
“If this brute is our leader, then I deeply fear for the future of our people. I challenge you to a Mak’Gora, foolish Deadeye…you know nothing of warfare, of leadership. I will put you down NOW, pup…”
“A Mak’Gora? You must seek death, old one, because it is all you will find from MY axe!” roared Kilrogg Deadeye in savage fury.
Kilrogg walked slowly away from the older Orc, and made several harsh, guttural noises as he marched away. The very mud beneath his powerful feet trembled as he travelled across it.
“Elder-Shaman. I give you a warning. Should I lose this Mak’Gora, see my reasoning and see the truth. Our people depend on the decisions of their leader. This reckless, young Orc is leading our people headlong into unforeseeable things. These barbarian clans are bred on war…it is their nature. Kilrogg’s lust for power knows no bounds. He carved his own eye to receive a vision of his demise, Elder-Shaman! Do not pledge your allegiance irrationally to such an arrogant young orc…” chided the old orc.
“I have seen visions of the future, Kroll’gar. This world will be swept by a tidal wave of desecration, and Grommash Hellscream, along with the other Clan Chieftains, will be relentless to all those who rebel against the Iron Horde. I am weak to have not spoken out against our allegiance to this tentative coalition, but I fear for my own life along with yours and the others’. If you can win the Mak’Gora against Kilrogg, perhaps his son, Jorin Deadeye, shall be a better leader for our people. Only time will tell…” spoke the Elder-Shaman, trying to regenerate the connection between the Elemental Plane and himself.
Kroll’gar the veteran-warrior of the Bleeding Hollow readied his own axes, made sure the hallucinogenic poison was removed from the blade, and readied for battle. As was considered honorable, the two bowed to each other thirty minutes before the Mak’Gora ceremony would begin. Kilrogg practiced his axe-wielding skills and thrust it around, cleaving the air around him in savage ferocity, while Kroll’gar watched the young chieftain’s axe wildly strike about. Kroll’gar noted that Kilrogg was quite a ferocious, furious fighter, and realized to win the battle, he would have to disconnect the chieftain from his monstrous weapon. Around them was a small dueling ring, about 20 meters wide and 20 meters long from tip to tip. Hundreds of Bleeding Hollow orcs gathered to witness a battle of life and death between two heroes of their clan. Older, more traditionalistic orcs cheered on Kroll’gar, while newer-generation, blood-thirsting orcs cheered for bloodshed and the hopeful victory of Kilrogg Deadeye.
“You will regret crossing me, frail, old orc…I will show you no mercy, and I will not let you survive this battle.” growled Kilrogg Deadeye.
“I hope even if you live, boy, this duel shall humble you. You would do well to learn some of your father’s, and your grandfather’s humility and honor.” growled the older of the two.
Kilrogg leered at Kroll’gar and eyed the weak spots in his opponent’s chainmail armor. He let forth the Orcish Battlecry, “Lok’tar Ogar!”, and thrust his axe over Kroll’gar’s head.
Kroll’gar hardly had time to roll away from the monstrous strike. Quickly, he regrouped and leaped into the air with brutal precision, knocking the younger orc upon his back in a strike a sprier orc would envy. Kilrogg laughed and hacked, and finally came to his feet to parry an overhead dual-strike. Kilrogg kicked Kroll’gar in the gut, knocking him backwards and stunning him for a while. In this time, Deadeye charged forth in savage fury, slinging his powerful, broad axe into his opponent’s back. Blood gushed from the old orc’s wound, and he roared in pain. He quickly rolled on the dirt to get back up, pained by his hideous gash.
“Give up now, old man. I shall spare you your life if you simply give in to my command.” murmured Deadeye, holding his axe at the ready.
“Are you scared that it shall be my axes that will pierce your weak flesh on this day, whelp-pup? It is you who should soon be begging for my mercy-for which I may or may not give it to such an ungrateful, dishonorable orc…” muttered Kroll’gar, who suddenly mustered the strength to leap over his opponent and gouge the twin axes into his foe’s shoulders.
Kilrogg fell over, blood spilling from his shoulders at an alarmingly fast rate. The chieftain growled in pain as his wounds controlled him. Kroll’gar looked at the wounded orc and laughed at his languid state.
“Bah, I’m just getting started, Kilrogg Deadeye. You don’t even deserve the honored name of Deadeye…your father was a brave and courageous man who cared for his clan. You care little for others, and you only seek power!” roared Kroll’gar, and he walked towards the fallen body of the Bleeding Hollow’s chieftain.
Suddenly, the ground trembled before Kroll’gar. Great spikes of earth ripped through the very ground and magmatic rock ripped through the ground. The earth seemed to howl in pain as the elements fell apart around Kilrogg and Kroll’gar. All of the tribesmen and tribeswomen ran in fear as the earth erratically churned in anger exemplified, personified. The Elder-Shaman and his underlings tried to calm the earth, but it again would not listen. Kilrogg could not move, and as horrific, abominable forms of rock formed out of the earth, it was Kroll’gar who leaped to defend his chieftain. Quickly he cut through the earth that attacked his leader, and as the magma poured around him, he backed up. The Shamans attempted to freeze the lava flow, but the elements were angered and agitated. They instead betrayed their cruel masters and froze their very veins, attempting to free themselves of Orcish control. Kroll’gar hacked and slashed through the rock, and other warriors joined by his side as lava erupted around them out of the earth. Kroll’gar roared as the heat intensified around him and the village erupted into flames. The shamans desperately called for aid of the few reverent elemental spirits that remained at their side, and suddenly, a great tide of water froze the lava at its source, combating in hatred. The horrific battle went on between the water and the lava as shamans imbued the water-element with their own power. The tide of the battle turned as suddenly the earth calmed itself down. Kroll’gar slashed at the earth as it raged on in aftershocks, but eventually it stopped. Bleeding and wounded, Kroll’gar fell to his knees and roared.
“Press on! The elements shall not stop me from fighting for the Bleeding Hollow!” growled Kroll’gar, slashing through the stone that assaulted Kilrogg.
The very earth roared in pain as the Orcs tried to contain the overflowing magma. The ground began to melt beneath their feet and cave in, and fear quickly occupied the soldiers’ and shamans’ hearts as the night went on. Kilrogg was carried away to a small hide tent where healers attempted to mend his bleeding wounds from the interrupted Mak’Gora. Kilrogg’s body was battered and he lay unconscious upon a small mat in the center of the tent. Kroll’gar slashed his axes in brutal fury as the elements tried to coil and snare him. In pain, he fell to his knees and his axes flew backwards, out of his grasp.
“Fight on, tribesmen of the Bleeding Hollow! Do not relent! Do not give these brutal elements any quarter they refuse to give you!” called Kroll’gar as he attempted to free himself of the earth-entanglement.
The orcs leapt upon the center, burning, blistering heart of the ring, and slashed their iron and steel into the ground as lava burst and bubbled around them. Tens, perhaps even hundreds, of Orcish shamans and soldiers fell flat upon their faces, their lives snuffed out by the earth’s agitated hatred.
The very earth shook and trees burnt and fell. A whole village was in flames as the earth ripped itself apart. Molten anger incarnate rose through the ground and attempted to slay each one of the shaman who had so abused them. The Elder-Shaman suddenly grabbed his staff and pierced it through the ground, using the winds to levitate him up into the air as flames licked the sides of his robes and staff. He roared and lightning came to his aid, circling around the very crater that had been formed. Suddenly, the blistering earth completely fell apart. A monstrous fire elemental arose from the depths, and roared in bloodthirsty fury.
“You have abused your pact of reverence to the Elemental Lords, weak little Shamans! I will char your very souls and send you to death in the depths of the Firelands!” roared the elemental as he pointed at the Elder and his men.
He lifted a molten hand and suddenly the Elder Shaman disappeared from the physical plane. The other shaman attempted to channel him back into the physical world, but the Firelands had trapped his soul. Kroll’gar and the others were trapped in bindings of unbreakable earth, and the more they struggled, the tighter the earth gripped. Kilrogg suddenly opened his eye and stood. He opened his tusked mouth and let out a bellowing roar, and picked up his monstrous bone-looking axe. He screamed and spat out a bit of boiling blood. He lifted his axe high above his own head and he leaped through the air, cutting right through the bestial elemental. He roared in sheer anger as the blade of the axe slashed straight through it like a hot knife through butter. Ashes flurried out of the spirit, and slowly he fell to pure ash upon the burning earth.
“You are a fool-chieftain, Kilrogg Deadeye. All you orcs are mere children, and your arrogance will one day be your demise…the elements will never heed your call once I warn them of your betrayals. This war is not over…your sick and twisted shaman will be burned by Ragnaros’ flame in the coming years…months…weeks…you have little time to live. Treasure every moment as it is your last. Strange things will come through the Dark Portal, and they will end you…” the blazing elemental hissed, as its body deteriorated to pure ash upon the earth.
“The elemental knows not what he speaks. We are the Iron Horde, and we will burn all to ash who stand before us in defiance! Roar with me in the battle-cry of the Orcish people! Lok’tar Ogar! VICTORY OR DEATH!” roared Kilrogg Deadeye, chieftain of the Bleeding Hollow Clan.
“This, Chieftain, is the start of a new world…a world painted in red and ash! None, not even the elementals or our own defiant kin, shall survive to tell the tale of our wrath! Not even you, Kroll’gar, veteran of the Bleeding Hollow-for you have sealed your fate on this day. No mercy shall be spared for your coward generation, Orc. I would not even look in your direction for anything, for it would bring me great shame in our people of the past…” growled Kilrogg, laughing at the fallen Kroll’gar.
“I see now why Kroll’gar despised you so, Kilrogg Deadeye…you are hotheaded, irrational, and after your life was saved multiple times in the heat of this battle…even though he gave his life for you…you care little for him. You treat him like he is worthless…and now he is dead. You truly have no honor, brute…” muttered an orc from behind in anger.
“You wish to speak to the Chieftain of the Bleeding Hollow? You dare dispute my honor?” growled Kilrogg Deadeye in obvious anger.
“A village has been destroyed by our peoples’ recklessness, Kilrogg! Of course I dispute your honor! You have sent aid to none and still you prophesize about the Iron Horde and how this world and all others shall be painted red! Is power truly all you want?” shouted the Orc who walked toward him in anger.
“I have much more honor than you, lesser orc, could ever even imagine. Perhaps it is time we have had an execution. Soldiers, to me!” growled Kilrogg, grabbing his axe in brutal fury.
“We will not halt our pursuit of glory for you who would lag behind. You are filth, weakling, and I will give you an honorable death…” growled Kilrogg, raising his axe in an agitated arc.
The other orc slipped away quickly and dodged. The hacking blade came down, sweeping into the orc’s side and Kilrogg laughed in bloodlust-forged fury.
“Call forth the beasts of the Tanaan. They shall be hungry for an early breakfast, and he shall prove a satisfying meal…” Kilrogg chuckled, furiously shaking in his hilarity.
“You don’t know what you’re doing, Kilrogg. I have information about the Iron Horde…” muttered the orc, who backed away as two monstrous, savage beasts cornered him back against a spiked plant.
“Halt. Let the pup speak.” Kilrogg said, and suddenly the two beasts turned away from him.
“I was on the road that intertwines with the Draenic one to the city of Shattrath. There was some sort of commotion coming from the city, and I heard the bloodcurdling battle-cry of the Warsong Clan. What business do they have with the Draenei in their own greatest city?” asked the Orc, shrugging.
“I do not know, but this information is quite intriguing. I will travel to the site of Oshu’Gun tomorrow in order to meet with the Warsong Clan to negotiate our allegiance to them. Perhaps I shall keep you alive, for now-but your slandering lands you a spot in the cages. Guards, arrest this man. He is not to leave the village for five months.” spoke the Chieftain.
The Chieftain let out one more great and savage laugh, and mounted himself upon his Battle-Worg. He rode out into the damp, dark, and foreboding jungle of the Tanaan ahead of him-he had known these swampy roads quite well since he had been living here his entire life. The sounds of the savage and ferocious birds made their angered noises as they battled each other for food-these carnivorous birds often fed upon the dead flesh of orcs slain by the creatures of the jungle.